HERE IS ONE STORY FOR YOU GUYS WHICH IS TOTALLY REAL..NOTHING IS COPIED..[ PLZ! FRNDS ,,,DO EXCUSE ME IF I NARRATE THINGS BADLY.....]
This is the whole incident which i heard from one of my collgmate..her name is monika she belongs to a village which is ...situated 30 km away from the city...
ALL THE THINGS SHE TOLD US ...ABOUT THIS EVENT IS REAL THERE IS NOTHING FAKE..SO KEEP YOUR CONC....OVER THE WHOLE STORY............
DESCRIBTION OF MONIKA--------->>>
at that period when this all happend monika was studing in 11th std...she was a studious girl...and the only girl of her parents...with elder brothers....she use to live in a village with her whole family..family was very caring......loving...
STORY --------->>>>>
everything was going happily in her family..there was a strong bond of love between family members...With all these happiness monika was unaware of the the storm which was about to arrive...to shake her whole family and herself...mentally and physically.....
Now getting to the main day of the incident------>>>>>>
Monika was busy in her preparation.....for her exam...she wake up in the late morning at 11.00 AM...as she was studing the whole night for the upcoming exam......
After having breakfast...and completing all other...routine work....till 11.30 AM...she got up ready for her tution class...she have to reach there at sharp 12.30 PM...Her place of tution was situated 1 km away from her habitation......
So hurriedly...she packed up all her books in her bag..waved her mother to say bye....and took her bicycle...and started her riding...with the thought to reach her tution place..as soon as possible..
The time she left her house was excatly ..11.45 AM...
NOW, she passed out from her village road ..she was on the road...which was like damn silent...vegetative area (forest kindaa place .).........In fraction of sec. she didnt know what pushed her down hardly..........
She fall down on earth....her cycle was at .some steps.... she cudnt understnd in that sec ..what the hell happend!!....she was feeling unconscious lil bit ..what all she cud see with her semi closed eyes...was her cycle...lying at some steps!!!!
After this she dont know..how she attended her class....she came back..to home..She was quite...normal...till then...
After getting freshed....she asked her mother for lunch...After she was done with her lunch..She told her mother .that she is tired a lot..n wanna take some rest..So dont let anybody to disturb her....
She was.. sleeping deeply..deeply deeply .....n DEEPLY....[after this sleep monika told me that she didnt know what happend next..after this her mother told us what happend actually]
After she got in..to her room..for sleep.her mother was working in the kitchen...After 15 mins..all of a sudden monika came out and...quietly stood up behind her..mother..in the kitchen..
Her mother was cleaning up the utensils..with all her conc...and as she turned back unknowingly..She got shocked..she saw monika was staring her with widely opened eyes.......mother said" monika kya hua beta" ("what happened monika")
Monika without any expression on her face lik a statue...said" mujhe KHANA DE!! mujhe BHOOK lagi hai" ("give me THE FOOD..IM HUNGRY")she said all this in a tune ..as if she is very angry !!
FOR a sec her mother was shocked..by the language n tone used by monika was unexpected...her mother understood that something really scray gonna happen...she can see the anger in the eyes of monika ..she maintained herself ina normal way ..n provided ...her food....her mother was watching monika from her kitchen window..what she saw .was..unbeliveble...!!!!!!
Monika was eating her food voraciously!!!...and chopping...!!! her food in her mouth...lik an animal...she ate up all the food whatever ......there was in the lunch...she was eating lik she havnt seen food in her life....with both her.. hands...
Watching all this scene her mother ..got scared a lot...she quickly...rang up her husband ..n told him all which happend in few hours...
As they live in village..so they strongly..belive..in paranormal activities...and supernatural powers...
In an hour her husband reached his house...He got shocked!! what he saw...monika was sitting on the floor..with hands and legs stretched out..n sitting.quietly...with her head lil bit down.... her...wife was crying ...standing near to monika...
all of sudden monika...stares her father ..started crying loudly .....you can say she was howling...badly...
PARENTS GOT STUNNED!!!!!!!.......they cant belive that all what is happening is not a dream.....this is........REALITY!!!
Seeing all this ..her parents were looking each other with tears in their eyes...n hopelessness..in their.. heart......
they both were...holding her . ..making her to stop howling....but she was ..lik deaf. ..monika..was crying with full of her throat...
After few mins she got unconscious....father mother both...made her sleep on the bed...
they knw that they hav to do something..n that is also as soon as possible...
Her father and both brothers...quickly ..moved for arranging..some pandit,.. while her mother..sit by her side..holding her hand...monika was sleeping soudly.....
at 11.30 PM...suddenly monika opened her..eyes...without any expression..she get her face closer to her mother's face..n say.." MUJHE KAHANA DE"( give me FOOD")
AGAIN the same condition happend she started crying loudly this time..she was screaming ....... v badly......all were shocked...what she is doing..she was..screaming n saying" maa ......maaaaaa!"
She was shouting in her room....between a pandit arrived with monika's brother..as pandit entered...she stood up on the bed...she took a glance over the pandit...and wiping her tears..she started uttering..something .with her head down......
Seeing all this pandit..get outside the room..to talk with her father...he asked her father and brother to make arrangments of things to be used in pooja...while her mother to hold monika...
all things were prepared ...till that time monika again got unconscious..well pandit after completing all his arrangements he ask parents to make monika sit before...him...they done the same...now that pandit started chanting some spells....
While pandit was chanting spells...monika opened her eyes..she says..in very low n weak voice......." mummy..what happened..what is happening here"..............
All this behaviour...made all of them think that monika is back to her normal state..that happiness can be seen easily in the eyes of her parents....
Now, pandit was behaving lik a minister lik he has done something....which was impossible for the world..well parents ..thanked pandit... with full heart...
n they all thanked god ..n gone to sleep...
Everyone was sleeping....there was complete silence..all over the house no electricity that time as it was village..so only moonlight was covering the whole village......
In clock ...its 2.00 AM of night.....suddenly in that dark monika wake up,..n walk slowly outside...she came out of her room n sits..in veranda...in complete dark only some of the moonlight was coming inside the veranda...
there was killing silence in allover the house..only...lizards...n grasshoppers were making noice ....in that silence.......her mother woke up ..as if someone shaked her.......
she got up....in the dark..she got stunned for a sec ..as monika was not there on her ..bed...her heart.. starts beating ...much faster.her breath was..high......she was..about to look for .. monika..by recalling her name......when she moved out in that dark ...all of sudden her heart came to her...mouth when she saw...monika...was sitting in a corner..,in that complete dark....her mother screamed out for help...........
All the members..came rushing to the voice...of her mother..they all were shocked..what they saw...monika has torned up all her clothes......she ...was....SHOUTING,,,SCREAMING......CRYING ...her eyes were blood red...n tears coverd her face,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
The only word she was spelling out n crying....."MAA ...mujhe bacha..maa......."
all were confused ,,coz monika..alwz call her mother as mummy never called her maa.....
but ya now they understood.that.....there is some power got inside monika... which is frightened......
it was all going out of control...Her mother started sprinkling... "gangajaal " over her..while her father n brother were holding monika..
...when her sprinklig gangajal over monika..she got somewhat calm .....in that mean time her brother called that pandit again..coz it was a horrible.....situation...for the family..
Pandit asked everybody to sit on the floor ...thn.. he put some candles..all around monika...although monika was calm ..but her eyes..were filled with deadly ...anger..!!!!!!!!!
All were scared they were expecting that something gonna happen now...with fear in their heart coz they knw that..ther.. daughter was now in horrible danger...
AS pandit..was. from village he was...surely gonna do something. ..with stupidity..
he started chanting..mantra's.....monika started ..moving her body....before,,,she can do something...that pandit slapped her..tightly..n said....." BOL BOL! KAUN HAI TU"(TELL ME WHO R U)
..now this made monika lik hell she started again that shouting..now pandit started..slapping her...again n again..1st slapp ..2nd slap..3rd slap..but when he raised his hand for the 4th slap...........
On the 4th slap....she screamed out...loudly..."MARTA KYA HAI...MUJHE KUCH NAHI HOGA..CHOT TO ISSE LAGEGI"..(ur slapping is useless on me..coz u r not hurting me u r hurting this girl)...........
Seeing all this condition father got up..n said stop beating my daughter,..monika's father was crying that time...tears were flowing over his cheecks... holding her daughter..hands ..he says.."meri bachi ko chor do..."
he said all this very calmly....to this monika replied..with her wide opened ,...staring eyes.....
Monika stares her father...dont knw what happend..to her she started crying lik she was in a great pain..n wann to tell something...........
Even that time her crying was also looking very scray.........now ...it was looking she was not monika..her way of staring changed,,n she started..saying something..
she said. ..""".that i m gal of 16years age...was studing in 10th std....i was going to my school in the morning..6 days before..that suddenly..10 boys kidnapped..me in a van....they took me to the jungle....their..they rapped me lik animals...they made me nude....after they raped me...they killed..at the same ..place....
narrating all this incident monika...was crying lik ...hell!!!!!!!!...all the people present their were weeping hearing that.....painfull accident....happened with that girl which was inside monika.......
she was crying horribly..she told each n everything how those 10 ..boys raped..her..,,how they killed her..........
she was crying loudly.....her pain can be guess how she felt when they were raping her.......
that spirit inside monika's body..told her father.... whole incident after that with her crying voice.....she asked monika's father..to contact her family so that ..her family can get her nude body from that jungle...n made her soul in peace....
The most amazing thing was that..she even given her adress of her home to monika's father... n the name of the boys who all raped her.........
after that suddenly monika shouted for once......lik someone pinched her sharply.........n got unconscious...again...but this time she was looking pale n weak...............
next day all was fine everything was good n better......but monika lost her good health.....even for 1 year she was not able conc,,,on her studies...............................
AFTER THIS EVENT TOLD BY MONIKA AND HER MOTHER TO ME..SHE TOLD ME THAT..TODAY ALSO SHE REMEMBER......THOSE DAYS..HER SOUL ..CHILLED UP WITH THAT FEAR..................
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are you sure that this wasnt copied... ???
ReplyDeleteI am perpars to bet dat yo freakin copied it frm orkut ...yo lazy freak... yo do dare to say dat yo wrote...aint yo ashamed of urself taking credit for sumthin dat aint urs...
copy cat :-/
ReplyDeletethis is my story who the hell are you to copy my story
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ReplyDeleteshame on u , u copy the story from some one else and u dont have courtesy to acknowledge her contribution . ppl like u r bull shit
ReplyDeleteDELETE MY STORY FROM YOUR BLOG CHEATER
ReplyDeleteI HAVE THE PROOF ITS MINE
ReplyDelete.DELETE THIS FROM YOUR BLOG CHEATER
u r a cheater u copied RIMI'S stories.
ReplyDeleteWhoevers story it is but this story is SHIT and if the author claims that this story is real then i wanna say:
ReplyDeleteSUCK MY BALLS BITCH!!!
Man this is really despicable ,,, u copied the whole story word by word ,,,
ReplyDeletewell u did wat u did bt on top of tat u mentioned nothing is copied,,
Come one buddy be a man,,
Kya Chutiya Story hai Bhenchod!!!
ReplyDeleteAgar churayi hui hai to koi aur story churani thi!!
:P :D
Hauu!!!:0 :0
ReplyDeleteWord to word....aur heading tak copy ki hui :P :x :-/
...Very bad.......ITna b nhi pta ki dusri ki chiz copy karna is bad manners...aur jhoot credit lena is more bura than that...!!
ye story March 2010 mein post hui thi by GBM urf Rimi di.....!!
AUr wo jo likh na apney sry if I narrate badly wo rimi di islie likha tha kyunki unki first story thi aur wo nervous thi....use b cpy kar lia :X
Delete dis story........ bludyy CheaterKookk.
ReplyDeleteshame on U........
ajeeb chotta type aadmi hai tu yaar doosre ka story copy kar ke post maar diya
ReplyDeletesharafat se delete maar de warna roz tere blog me ek comment karunga
chal munna ab delete maar de and dont mess with others stories especially mine and rimmi
take it as a warning buddy
KAUN HAI YE RIMMI.....LE LO USKI CHUMMI...
ReplyDeletebus kar oyee Kudiiyaan naal behave kar riyaa haii,,,,,,,
ReplyDeleteaur ye kya haii,,, galiyoon key alawa aur kuch comment hi nahe aa rahe is Blog pey to,,,, :p :D
bull shit copy cat, use ur brains better rather copying it dumb dick
ReplyDeleteGhost Community Owner Neelam Here
ReplyDeleteI request the owner of the blog to remove this story from the blog or else i will not only post a complaint regarding you in google but also make sure that you fail to access any of my community on orkut.
Ab to aap gyee uncleee!! :D :D
ReplyDeleteabhi b time hai delete it!!
beta laal tune uncle ka baat nahin suna na ab to neelam aunty bhi aa gayee ab delete maar de pyaare
ReplyDeleteor sorry bhi bol diyo rimmi jee se
ladki ko gali dene ka bohot shauk hai beta kabhi apne se baat bhi kar liya karo aaasmaan ka sair kara doonga tujhe
now enuff of bullshit and bullpee and get down to delete this blog
How dare U...U bloody...The story is copied from orkut...evrybody knows that...better delete this blog...before You face the worst....
ReplyDeleteIlletrate senless fellow...
Hello Mister
ReplyDeleteRimmi ne Itni mehnat se yeh sab stories likhi hain unlike you jisko Copy bhi ni krna aata hai..So better delete your blog buddy if you wanna see ur virtual soul alive...
If you're really much intrigued by the horor stories then better utilise ur brain n work out on some:)No point in un-necessarily copying the stuff from "Ghost" community Of Orkut....
n now coming onto the crap u've posted... i just wanna say k gaaliyan sabko deni aati hain...but agar hum b dene lage toh tum jaiso me n hum-me diffrence kya rahega..So kindly stop blabbering all this abusive stuff n Do what u're directed to:X
-Amu
u r gone mr.gaaligloch
ReplyDeletecool down rimi..i mean story to sabki copy ki hain na..why r u jmping so much..bs use writer ka name dena chahiye tha..nd its nice collection....isn't it?
ReplyDeletemazaa aa gaya comments pad kar..lagee rahoo..
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ReplyDeletebetyChood tanney aur koi na mila tha chutya bnawa ka!!!! kuttay ja kuch kaam ker jaa kay!!
ReplyDeleteIts totaly copied i dont weather its on.orkut or nt but i m 20002% bit sure dat its completely copied story coz same story had been shown on T.v show named Aahat . So better try real story
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